Forum Discussion

Contributor 2

3 months ago

Ask-an-Expert: Social Media Post Audit - 3 Simple Tweaks to Boost Your Results

Want more watch time, saves, DMs, or bookings from your social media posts? 👀 🌟 Drop a link to one of your Reels, TikToks, or carousels below, and starting November 3rd, I’ll give you a quick 3-...

social media marketing

Contributor 4

2 months ago

Audit me! https://www.facebook.com/HomeProCoaching

julie
Jobber Community Team
2 months ago
Hey Kelly, thanks for sharing your page!

To provide you the best feedback, Hunter will need a link to one specific post instead of your full page. Could you drop that here? Thanks!
- KellyUGuerrero
  Contributor 4
  2 months ago
  Sure thing!! Here you go! https://www.facebook.com/reel/1079768557406808
Dumpire
Contributor 2
2 months ago
Your scripting is amazing, and the way you move through the story is perfect.
You need to focus more on the hook and keeping the transitions cleaner. Try jump cutting rather than transitions.
Try this as a hook. "I lost $10,000 in x days by making this one mistake" and then talk about how that happened and how you learned from it. Then explain to people how you can prevent them from making that mistake.
Try and make your hooks dramatic. add a big red number with a sound effect so people immediately think "how did she lose $10k in x amount of days"