Ask-an-Expert: Social Media Post Audit - 3 Simple Tweaks to Boost Your Results

1. Your scripting is amazing, and the way you move through the story is perfect.
2. You need to focus more on the hook and keeping the transitions cleaner. Try jump cutting rather than transitions.
3. Try this as a hook. "I lost $10,000 in x days by making this one mistake" and then talk about how that happened and how you learned from it. Then explain to people how you can prevent them from making that mistake.

Try and make your hooks dramatic. add a big red number with a sound effect so people immediately think "how did she lose $10k in x amount of days"